i started this the other nite wen i was walking home from sound wave.
its the first part to this song ... now is it a coincidence that i wrote this before my cuz posted his blog ... or is it a coincidence that he mite have been watching it that same nite ...
this new one i would like some help on ... because im thinking of adding some bits of information to it ... the first part was ment get peoples minds ticking ... the second adding information into it to make them try to see what im actually on bout ... but at the same time still getting them to think about it ...
now heres the start of it:
take a look around
is this what u want
take a look around
is this what u realy want to hear
is this what u realy want to see
does any one get it ?
does any one see that this is not whats realy goin on ?
wake up wake up
take a look around
wake up wake up
is it what u realy want
do u want it like this
feedback and criticism would be much appreciated ...
i need somewhere to start on the second part ...
cheers and keep spiraling
r
4°
- mystery
- sup guys ... well im stepping through my shadow ... im a vocalist in a band called box .... struggling quite a fair bit ... this is my release ... this is me .... bring on the random .... swing on the spiral ... peace the fuk out !!
3 comments:
coincidence?
there are no coincidence's
nice work champ. keep going on all fronts. i left some thoughts to your post on my blog, check it for info.
"i need somewhere to start on the second part ..."
mmm i think you should focus. direct your thought on a particular piece of this whole BIG topic. theres so many smoking guns out there :)
S.
PS. these written thoughts and texts, i suggest you make sure your saving them outside of blogger and or writting them down. so they dont get lost.
"Ideas ... Ideas are Bulletproof" V.
i watched 911 Mysteries last night (DVD) and then came to read your words again.
feedback: its good mate. simple but effective. and its open ended so the reader could take their own meaning from it. i like it.
you should dig maybe into themes and words surrounding waking up? sleep? REM? brainwashing and explore.
ive burnt some dvds for you to watch, i'll pass em on later. going back to your other post for a sec.
indigo children > my mum is interested in this :) maybe give us some more info on it from the web and ur thoughts.
much love
S.
whats up dude, you seem to have crawled into your spider hole lol.
start throwing your ideas and thoughts out here again. who knows they may stick!
some good info on my blog as well lately. really want you to make the Black Keys show as well mate. $55 / metro freo / may 14th. selling fast.
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